Sunday, May 1, 2011

CREATE AN AMAZING HERO STORY (9º STUDENTS)

Hello!
Remember your story must be about a hero. You can write about people or maybe animals. Re-read the example in your workbooks.

Here another example:

LIFEGUARD TOBY : By Farid Villanueva




Toby, my dog is my favorite hero. He saved me from drowning in my grandparents' lake. It was last year summer. My family decided to go vacations there. We arrived to the farmhouse and inmediately we went to have a picnic near the lake. I was swimming when suddenly something strange pulled my legs and I began to sink. I shouted for help and Toby, my dog,  jumped into the lake, swam, took my long hair and carried me to lake's side. It was incredible. We were surprised. Toby was really a strong dog.
                       

27 comments:

  1. My hero paco
    Paco is my hero; he is a wonderful and intelligent parrot.
    Last night we were sleeping when he listened a noise in the house.
    Paco started to shout: “thief, thief, thief” all the family woke up and we found a man in the kitchen, my mother called the police and catched the thief.
    I give a gift to paco, my hero

    By: Jesus olivera

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  2. my name is heroic look good it was too late when we heard someone shouting and reach see it was a woman who was with thieves and they saw us running toward us when they see a hurried and reached him in the head with a stone and all end aa safe and he is my hero

    author: Lorena florez

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  3. My hero tatti
    Tatti is my hero it was a very pretty and showy cat once a cat it tries to eat up to the parrot of my brother and tatti I do not allow it since it was a very wild cat and attack the cat that intentava to eat up to the parrot

    By: Laura torres

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  4. Blake the hero
    My hero's name is Blake. He saved a woman die on a traffic accident. The woman was walking on a street when a car appeared and the driver was drunk. Blake ran towards the woman and they removed her of there. The woman was very good and now they are good friends

    By: Sandy Galvis

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  5. Lola is my hero, is a cute kitten
    Last week unless a man burned to death at home, the man put a note on the tail of lola.
    Lola was very intelligent and fortunately was able to seek help prevent the death of this man by lola

    By:karen hernandez

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  6. The young Daniel Hernandez was a few meters of Congresswoman Gabrielle on Saturday when he was shot in the head and did not hesitate a second to help her, risking his own life, for what many now consider him a hero. the student's action, 20, was recognized today by the Governor of Arizona, at the start of the legislative session at the state Capitol. "Everything went very fast, my first instinct was to rush to her aid and give pressure to the wound on the head, " said Hernandez, who had only five days as an intern in the office of the congressman. The young man told the first thing he did was stand, sit in the position because there was a risk he was choking on his own blood. Hernández, only took a basic course in first aid when I was in school

    by: shirley bohorquez

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  7. my hero's name is Max. He saved a 5 year old child falling from a building six stories high. The child was playing on the terrace of her apartment when the child derrepente jumped the fence. if not for the hero max estabubiera child died, say the neighbors of the Child


    autora:luisa vergara

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  8. my favorite hero is Hancock is a very good person to save the lives of many people in new york about evil trying to take over the world with his powers rescued many people and to give the police the evil was amazing with its super transport forces destroyed the wicked, and with his great intelligence disable some bombs and everyone cheered so
    by: roadstead sheyla Tapiero

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  9. My hero’s name is juan
    he is a boy he saved a dog of earthquake
    the dog was sleeping upstairs when the started juan ran into the house and went upstairs to the dog’s bedroom he took the dog in his hand and dropped the dog from the bedroom window

    by :juan almanza

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  10. my favorite hero is a dog named Lucas saved my life when I was a boy of eight years, that day I went to the beach with my parents and we got my dog I decided to get into the water but did not know that was deep soil the sea and walked there and I started to agoarme and I screamed for help and my dog got into the water arrived where I was grabbed by the shirt and took me to the edge of the beach where my parents gave me first aid
    by: jorge aldana

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  11. Recognition of a dog named "Orion"
    "Orion" a Rottweiler dog breed, pet Mauricio Perez became rescuers during the fateful night of that fateful day Wednesday 15 and Thursday morning, December 16, 1999, when the flood destroyed the residence and reached the area where living in Cerro Grande, Naiguata, Vargas State, Venezuela.
    The dog barked nervous since early this morning because his instinct told him that is currently residing a catastrophe of incalculable proportions when the rush of water forced them to their owner Mauricio Perez to leave his residence and go to safety, was when the value of the animal was tested.
    "Orion" except a little girl of eight years was washed away by water, everyone thought the dog had gone mad to see him jump and swim through the troubled waters that brought logs and stones, they never think that was the beginning one of the feats of the unsung heroes who demonstrated their courage in this situation, some of the neighbors shouted at him to swim beside the girl and when she opened her mouth seriously thought the bite, but not so, he did a so gently by the clothes that no damage caused and brought him to shore where people were amazed no later jumped back and pulled to a second child 14 years of water, then helped to raise eight children to high places, and spent the night of Wednesday and part of Thursday morning until the witnesses of this fact recorded that "Orion" rescued 37 people from drowning from a small eight years until an old man of 80, and this was made in response to a natural feeling of human solidarity, his performance was incredible, our recognition of a "Big Dog Rescue."

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  13. my hero's name is sam
    the North American is a dog who saved a girl from being docked with their super powers so strong that the bark achievement driven away to the robbers so this simple dog unless a girl is my hero so. by: laura valle

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  14. Long ago, when gods still existed, there was peace in the world, but that peace would end soon, because according to prophecy come Ragnarok, the twilight of the gods, but also has a hero, born of ice save the world with a powerful sword infierno.La even freeze the very same sword was hidden in the mountains of Thrymheim, out of reach of humans, dwarves, elves or any raza.Solo which has a good heart and warrior spirit, the carrier will sword by :edgar ayala

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  15. my hero is bonis
    bonis is my hero, who swam 7 hours by the Rio de la Plata to save her a baby cat, joins a list composed of adult cats and even a dog who, by dint of courage and valor, were given a final happy to dramatic situations.

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  16. My favorite hero was my kid was bred dog Dalmatian was a good tall kid was very angry I could not see someone who does not know why she threw him to bite or bark. Well kid was a very obedient dog once we were all in the house of my grandmother and I was sick we were all in the room my grandfather and my uncle in the room when suddenly a robber entered the room and said to deliver silver or if not then kill them at that time was loose and the kid but he saw when the thief entered and immediately went to him and bit him in the leg and then the thief fell and then my uncle and my grandfather caught and tied him up and called police and waited to take him away and kid that day was the great hero was a great meal for being a great superhero.


    By: sharon llanos

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  17. mario andres arias
    my favorite hero is mario andres arias. A little over 10 days, staged a heroic story, but this time the scenario was Españolísimo Barcelona. as he walked every day for the streets of Sant Andreu, when he saw a baby was about to fall from a balcony. Without hesitating for a moment stood below, arms extended and interrupted when, seconds later, it crashed. Although he could not hold it well, managed to cushion the blow to his chest. The little boy turned two the next day and you have to whom to thank each celebration. by Nilson alcendra

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  18. my hero this story is cuandyo taxes down the street my mom com when po almost caio but rasied in a hole and Mrs. GOD which I stand and this time lady luck to me alcanso save to fall into that hole if it were here or and not telling this story but I'm good here rasied for letting me tell this story grasias by: marlon salazar gomes

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  19. Ludys Torres

    The name of my hero is Sterling Knight. He is a guy in the day, at night becomes a superhero. Fight against injustice and protect the defenseless. He is very nice and is the most popular in your school. In a very dark night he heard screams Sterling Knight asking for help, he and his power of ultra-vision might know what part asking for your help. In less than a moment arrived at the place where he observed that some hijackers were attempts on the lives of Alex and Miley, two girls from their school. Sterling with his powers could defeat the hijackers ... the girls were very impressed and happy for what he did Sterling Knight, you want to pay for what he did but Sterling did not get it because that was his job to save people who are at risk

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  20. wandy my piggy
    wandy puppy is pig who helped me the other after having been loked in my grandparent is farm.osic with me the fuck could the keys were on the side of the bars and give the to me so i stay seve for several hours loked inside that good is whi i love wandy never imagined he could be so clever
    by:yennis lozano

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  21. by:mauricio
    my hero's names is pepe madero. he is a teenager. he saved a girl of kill drowned in a flood.the girl is playing with his friends when started the flood. he listening to the family of the girl screaming and the see that was drowning. is released the flow and the rescued. the family of the girl thanked him.
    the girl was good.
    it was an incredible but false story!!!!

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  22. my hero's name is sam. he is a cat. he saved to the elderly that was going to the bitten by a rate. the elderly was sleeping in his a bed. when know the rate it thrwos him above but the cat i know he eats it.this one history of admire shows the love that has a cat to its owner by: heidy hernandez

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  23. PACHO MY HERO
    Pacho My hero is a child who saved her younger sister died asphyxiated by the smoke that caused the flames when their house caught fire. The baby was sleeping in his crib and pacho to see all his house in flames lit surroundings regardless of the consequences and pulled her sister and saw she was fine and all his neighbors called him the hero of the neighborhood
    BY: GINETH MACEA

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  24. Balto (1923-1933) was a Siberian Husky dog breed, born in the small town of Nome (Alaska). Considered as the hero of the village children Nome. Balto took the first two years of his life to bring food for the children, although he was considered a dog quite slow and inadequate for the job.

    by: karla perz.....

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  25. Genre: Fiction
    My heroe is Matt Davies. This is a very important music player, his music saved the life of a very special person. He plays in a band, so he convinced his mates to play music for this cause. Now, the whole band had saved the life of an adolescent.

    This person was about 12, and he had a heart complication that put him in risk of die. He was in need of money to get a new heart transplanted to his body. His family could not afford the huge amount of money the needed for this surgery.

    Finally, Matt and his band called Funeral performed a concert, and all the money of the entrances was donated to Michael Gigs, this young man thanked them for such as cute help. Living longer was the best gift for him thanks to this band.
    BY: LUIS MANUEL VILORIA ( TOTTI)

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  26. A parent of a tiny village in the Andes has become a hero in Argentina after walking for more than 10 hours by cliffs and ravines, in temperatures below zero, with her ​​three years in arms Trying to reach a small health center where the child was attended suffering from malnutrition, as explained by the same father and the doctors confirmed.
    by: Karol Miranda

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  27. Tittle: ONLY ONE HERO
    the name of my hero is ayco. is a dog. and is my best friend. I admire him a lot, because we defend myself and my family from danger. one day she tried to put a thief in our house, my dad was sleeping when we saw very strong ayco was barking, and we all woke up and realized what was happening, driven away and the thief ran away. all thanks to our hero ayco. coo is our baby. love him very much.
    By : Duvys lozano

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